Sunday, 3 April 2016

Independent Novel Studt

INTRODUCTRY POST!


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  • Author- Jandy Nelson
  • Publisher- Dial Books
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  • Number of pages- 371 pages
  • Synopsis: Noah and Jude are non identical twins and they live on the California      coast in the town of Lost Cove with parents. Twins are always close together,  by age of 13 Noah fall in live with boy named Brian. For Jude she starts to make ups and dress up lie teenage girls. However few years lather they stop talking each other there something happened between them. Through the story they try to find the way to get back together and try to change the their world.

 Summaries Post

This story is start with Noah's 13 years old experience. he was get bullied by Zephyr and Fly because Noah was gay person and likes arts. He was drawing the David in his sketch book and Zephyr and Fly tried to rip up the drawing. Then, Noah's twin sister Jude came and said the drawing is good so they stop the beating up Noah and run away. through this Noah think that Zephyr likes Jude so they stop the bullying. When Noah and Jude get back home and having a dinner mother Dianna told them to go to the fine arts high school. This news was good for Noah because he could study the arts entire high school. Weeks later Dianna, Noah, and Jude went to the city museum cafĂ© both of them are going to apply to CSA in a year. At there Noah saw boys and he things they are cute. Mother and Jude was talking about grandma's bible and mother thinks Jude have to receive the bible. In the bible there are so many ideas and advice. After the conversation mother told them to show the sketchbooks so Noah showed to her, but she complained his art. then mother ignored Jude's sketch.

Three years later Jude become 16 old and she always carrying her grandmother's bible and follow the advice. two years ago her mother Dianna kill by accident in rainy days of December. Right now Jude's are in the CSA and leaning arts however she thinks she is not belong to this school. Because her art works keeps failing apart in ceramic and sculpture. Her art teacher wondered how Jude passed the test and asked anything that she have to say. Then Jude asked teacher to she wants to make something out of stone. So her teacher set up the tutor Guillermo Garcia who works at outside of school and he knew about Dianna.

In the story Jude has ability to talk with her dead grandmother but she can't communicate with her mother. One day she went to the church and think about is she get along with her mentor and reflected on her general life. Suddenly someone took her picture, the English accent photographer was standing there and talked with her and leave. Now she headed to the Guillermo's place and photographer was there.

On the way home Jude received emergency text from Heather the closest friend of Noah. it said " Noah at Devil's Drop in 15" it means Noah is try to dive into the ocean at Devil's Drop. So Jude run to the devil drop and saved Noah several times because he keeps jumping into ocean. After few times Noah success the jump and Jude though she could go back time.

When Noah was using a binocular from his roof he found a new boy who watching Noah through the telescope. He met with new boy and boy gives Noah a black stone. After that Noah went to CSA portrait drawing class but he didn't registered for class so he draws outside the window. the student came and impressed with Noah's work but they burned his art work.
Few days later Noah meets up with telescope boy who likes to collect stones. Through conversation Noah get crush on him.

when Noah and Jude was playing a board game called Ouija, they asked who is going to CSA and who's not. The board game said Jude will get into the CSA and Noah don't. They did several times but result was same. That night  Noah started to worry and he couldn't sleep so he went to the wood with new kid. He introduced him self as Brian. He goes to east coast boarding schools and he skipped grade. Also he likes to collect a space garbage. When Noah was taking with Brian he encounter with Fry and another bully guy Big Foot and they called Noah and Brian as a homo. Noah was try to run away from there but Brian he threaten bullies by throwing meteorites like a machine gun. After that bullies apologized to them and run away.  Noah and Brian started to spending time together and Jude noticed. Then she get interested in Brian.
Noah and Brian watching stars from the roof Brian talked about his father who left house. while watching stars they had romantic time.

Next day The Hornet Girls Courtney Barrett, Clementine Cohen, Lulu Mendes and Heather invite Brian and Noah to hand out. Noah leaves because he didn't want to see Brian talk to girls. On the way back he imagined everything had last night.
Jude and mother having a quarrel about Jude's clothes and makeups. Jude is jealous about Noah and Brian hanged out with Hornet Girls. When Brian and Noah went to the movie they hold their hand.

Before Brian head back to east they had a party. At there they play game that one boy and girl choose from team and they locked in a closet for seven minutes to see what happened. Noah and Heather choose for closet and he kissed her imagining her as Brian. When Brian saw them he got angry and he went to the closet with Jude. Noah couldn't stand there and leave the party.

Go back to sixteen old  Jude. Jude are try to make a stone sculpture with Guillermo's guidance. However she can't stop thinking about the English accent guy. Then Noah came to her room  now he is in a Roosevelt High and he joined a cross country team. He tells her about their father will away for week and he planning to have a party. Jude worried about Noah because he changed.
Jude knows that Noah is gay and he try to make a contact with Brian but he didn't responded. Also she knows about father and Noah's mental condition. they said they are fine but they don't.
During the Noah's party Jude sneak out from the house and when to Guillermo's place and watch him work. He working on clay and stones and she wishes if Noah and mother could see his work. However next morning Guillermo through his sculptor to window. So Jude shout and run to the window and stop him.

She runaway from the studio but Guillermo catch up her and she told her to not left him alone. Jude explains she needs to be mentor by Guillermo because she impressed by his work. She believes he could help her to what she must make. He invite Jude to his office and give her cup of coffee. While talking with him she figure out that he is in a lovesick.
He agreed with becoming Jude's mentor and begins to work together. One day she went to the Guillermo's studio she learn about English guy and his name is Oscar. He is in college and Guillermo saved his life years ago. She begins to make contact with Oscar and falling love in him.
 However later in story from their conversation she find out they are non blood related father and son. She think if Noah and father has this kinds of relationship.

She explains Guillermo about she wants to make a sculpture of her mother, Jude think this is the only way to get forgiveness from her mother ghost. He accept her request and they starts nude studies of Oscar. He tells Jude not to think but draw with the heart. After that she had conversation with Oscar and he asked her to be a nude model for him. she reject the request, also she jealous of the fact Oscar appears to be dating a girl named Sophia.
While Guillermo is out Jude try to finds things that represent him. At his office she found written letters but never mailed. She also found hundreds of books, including some written by her mother. She stale them and leave studio.

When she gets home Noah interested to learn that Jude will doing sculpture of their mother. When she explain the detail about the plan and she talks about their mother's appearance Noah fakes receiving call and leaves. Jude realized that Noah don't want to talk about their mother and she thought they will never be go back to old days.

When Jude talks to her grandmother's ghost Oscar came in and saw her talking. she explains that she could talk to grandmother's ghost. he amused rather then weirded out. while they are talking he explains he and Sophia not a couple, and that they never been in a relationship more than nine days.  Also, he explain that he could communicate with his mother in his dream and he keeps mother's favorite seashell as a lucky charm.
After talked with Oscar she begins to wonder why she could talk with dead or she just making up in her mind. When she researching about Oscar and she found that his last name is Ralph. that moment she remembered that her parrot keep saying searching for Ralph.

Go back to Noah. Noah is approaching the age of 14. after the party Brian leaves, he sees instant messages between Jude and Brian and Noah jealous about them. He goes to 225 Day Street, where Guillermo's studio. He watched Guillermo like a father and he was teaching students. When Noah saw them he realized how much he wants to get into CSA. On the way home Dianna pick him up. while Noah notices strange behavior with her lately, like smoking cigarettes, and always keeping her cellphone with her. Later Noah learns that his parents need space and are separating. Also, Jude tells Noah that she didn't steal Brian and nothing happened in the closet. At the message she was talking to other person.

In the winter break Brian return and they went to the wood and kissed. Brian tells Noah that how much he important to him. They went to Noah's house and about to have sex in Noah's bedroom but Dianna walked in to the room. Brian leaves, and Dianna talked Noah that his feeling is normal and needs courage to be himself. Noah tell mother to not to tell his father. Next day he saw mother was talking in the phone saying she is going to meet at the Wooden Bird to discuss something important with Noah. Noah get panicked because he thought mother going to tell dad about Noah is gay.
At the Wooden Bird Noah saw that his mother and Guillermo is kissing, and he knew that mother and Guillermo. He run away while running he saw Brian and Courtney, who have been kissing. Noah confused all the events happening around him and he felt hurt, helplessness and betrayal. He couldn't take it and he shouts that Brian is gay and run away.
At home mother explains Noah about relationship with Guillermo and she thinking about divorce.

Back to Jude age 16. Jude looks at a photograph of her parents. When they married father was eleven years older then mother.
Jude goes to work with Guillermo and he tell her what good for heart and bad for heart. Then she thinks about past, about how angry she was with her brother for attempting suicide. So she only mailed her application to CSA and not Noah's. This is why she feels her mother destroys everything she creates. She puts her emotion into her rock sculpting and think about her mother.
Then Jude send an E-mail to CSA about to see Noah's portfolio. She texts message that she wants to talk to him and return to sculpture. While walking back home she got text from Heather saying Noah is not himself, and he wants to jump Dead Man's near the spot. At a party Zephyr helps Jude to find Noah. Noah was really drunk and he was standing near the cliff's edge. However, Oscar came out from nowhere and stops Noah from Jumping.

After rescued Noah Jude went back to studio and finishing up the Dianna's sculpture.  Later Oscar came and looks at Jude's sketches of her mother and he knew who she is. Then Guillermo came and said he can't help her any more and told her to leave. Noah came to studio and he blames his mother's death on Guillermo. Through their conversation Jude realizes Guillermo was having an affair with Dianna. Noah confessed he lied about Dianna was try to find way to fix the family, actually she was thinking of divorce. He did this to protect Jude and father. He blames himself for death because before Dianna got in accident Noah telling her to he hate her.
After the conversation Jude told Noah about she never mailed his CSA application. He didn't get angry because he knew he is a good artist. Also he realized that art is supports be about magic not about get into school. Noah and Jude forgive each other and their relationship back to normal.
When Jude and Noah walking with father Noah tell the truth about their mother. However father didn't blame him. Also, father forgave Jude about application. Later they met Oscar and he promised her to he will wait her to come back, but Jude refused to let him stay away.
Noah and Jude went to see Guillermo and talked with him. Jude decided to keep working with Guillermo, and she returned Mother's book to Guillermo. Later Their father learned that Noah is gay and Noah has gotten together with Brian.


Blog #2: I have a friend that his parents are lesbian. Frist time I met them I couldn't understand why people wants to marry with same gender. Also, I thought his parent didn't think about his feelings because if parents are gay or lesbian he will get teased by friends at school. He is the one who gets hurt. I know being him/herself is need lot of courage and his parents had.  I will accept the gay or lesbian but I am not sure about having kids.

Blog #3: To become a friend I would choose Brian Connelly. Through the novel I felt Brian is same as us. In the story he like astronomy and collecting meteorites, great baseball player,  but he secretly gay and he worries about people finds out that. Every person has one or two secrets and they afraid that people find out and how they react and, become alone. So most of the people pretends to be straight. I am same as Brian and everyone, I don't want to be alone.

Blog #4: When Noah figure out that Dianna was having affair with Guillermo and he run away. Then he saw Brian was kissing with Courtney. Noah couldn't take the reality so he shouts that Brian is gay and run to the house. Through here Noah betrayed by two person who he trusted, He trusted Dianna because she is his mother and he thought she care about her family but she didn't. For Brian, Noah loved him and he thought Brian is the companion that both of them are gay. However Brian didn't have a courage to be himself. If I was Noah I will do same thing what he did and I will never trust anyone.

Blog #5: When Noah discovered that his mother was killed by accident he tried to protect his family he hide the truth, that Dianna was having affair with Guillermo. Also, he regrets and blamed himself about Dianna's death for long time. Because before the accident he told his mother that he don't like her and he thought that words broke her heart. I had same experience that before I came to Canada I had quarrel between my friend before reconciled with her I leaved Japan. Through 5 year I couldn't make a contact with her and by the time I back to Japan she already moved somewhere else. That time I regret about fight because I lost my friend and I will never apologize her.



Tuesday, 27 January 2015

Final post

1) Self Regulation.
For this section I think I did pretty good. There are some examples, first one is attending class, for this semester I missed the class for 3-4 times however other then that I arrived on time everyday.
Also I brought the device everyday and taking responsibility at class too. 
Next thing are class time work and homework. At class I controlling myself from phone and listen the what the work all about. Also for homework I got help from my mother and finishing them. So for work is I always finished on time.
Last one is discussion in the class and commenting at classmates. This one is my weak point of this course because first of all everyone was helping me to understand the what is the assignments  are. So I have to listen their discussion or see how they write. Most of the time for commenting I said to them was how good they are or how I like. However  just one of them I gave advice to the person
For novel I read the book during winter breaks. So I think I was ahead of my class for novel. 
For this section I will give myself 28%.

2) Quality of Communication skill.
My first example is "Wittering and Representing"'s C1 "write meaningful personal texts that elaborate on idea and information. And this one what I did.

Next one is Thinking (Reading and Viewing)'s B8 "explain and support personal responses to texts... And this is what I did 
The last one is from Strategies (writing and representing)'s C7. Select, adapt, and apply a range of strategies to revise,edit,and publish writing and representing. And this is what I did 
For this section I'm going to give myself 27%.

3) Contribution to Learning Environment.
For this section what I did was edit my work when people commented my assignments, I shared idea with people in my class, I have to understand the assignments so I really listened the conversation in the class and also I finished assignments on every on time. The part I have to improve is comment or join to conversation more.
For this section I give myself 29%.

Wednesday, 21 January 2015

Under the Rug

It happened again, there was something in under the rug. I first noticed creepy things two weeks ago. Middle of the night I heard a squeaky sound coming from my living room. In my house, I have old furniture so it might be cabinet door was open. I looked around for the source of the sound but the entire door was closed. Then few minute later the sound stopped. I looked around the house once more, and I found the window was little bit opened. Then I figured out the wind was making a sound because that night was a windy nigh so I went back to bed. However next morning what I found was my daughter's stuff was all over the floor and a animal footprint was on it. My daughter had been missing for 2 years, she ran away from our home because of fight between me and her. I still regret what I had done to her and felt so lonely without her.  When I saw her things was messed up on the floor this made me really mad. After that nothing happened so I thought the situation had return to normal. However just be sure I locked her stuff every night put it back into the box.

 Then, tonight it happened again! In front of me. There is something moving under the rug and making a strange sound. I don't know what it is under the rug but think is not a good thing. So I grab a dining chair and smash it on to the rug. Suddenly something came out from under the rug. It was a fluffy white, blue- eyed kitten. Then I realized the foot print on my daughter’s shirt must be from the kitten. So I grab the kitten rush to the window, I open the window roughly and try to throw it out the kitten outside. However When I see the kitten's eye and colour of the eye remained me a daughter because it was same colour. Then I realized I had done something to my daughter. When we had augments about her life style then turn into a fight and in the last I told her to get out from the house. I thought I was angry at this kitten but now I felt guilty of throwing away so I decided to keep the kitten. Next day I spend some time with kitten, so I put daughter's stuff away because kitten is always by my side. Also I put the box where the kitten can't reach it.
However following day the stuff was all over the place and next day it happened again. Then I got really confused so I looked up at the kitten. The kitten was staring straight at me and Kitten’s blue eye made me feel the kitten is try to tell me something, but I didn’t know what so I tried to find the answer. Then one thing what I realized was that the kitten is sitting on my daughter's favorite cloth. Through the following week I found the kitten on same spot.

 From this I felt this kitten is somehow related to my daughter. So I decided to find out the secret of this kitten. This incidence is happened in the middle of the night. So the next night I hide myself in the between the bookshelves and to see what happening. Then, a few minute later, something came into the room with box.
 It was a kitten but also a sprit that looked like, Sara the blond straight hair, blue eyes and freckles on her face it was my daughter! Sara started to open the box and put the stuff all over the floor and she looked her stuff one by one. Then they found me so I came out from the bookshelves.

I asked Sara what happened to her then she told me everything. When she ran off from the house she felt guilt about the fight so she decided to go home and apologize to father. However the way to home accidently she was get into the car accident and died. She can't die like this because they are still fighting and she didn't apologize to her father. So she wished for to go back home then her wish was granted. Next thing she turns into a white kitten. It took two years for her to get back. But she have to realize me the kitten was her so she put her stuff until I notice. That night we spend all for talk and next morning she was already gone.


 After that night I never saw my daughter again.  Sometimes I talked to the kitten because I thought it might respond, but she never did. However, I didn't feel any sadness or loneliness because the kitten is always by my side and it made me feel that my daughter is here.

Man From The South

Major Elements of Short Story:
1) Plot
-Introduction
Begging of the story.
It was getting on toward six o'clock so I thought I'd buy myself a beer and go out and sit in a deck chair by the swimming pool and have a little evening sun.

-conflict (man vs man / man vs him self) (internal/ external)
Man vs Man is the bet. Old man challenged to American boy to light up the ciger 10 time in the row. If boy wins he could get old man's Cadillac. However if old man wins boy have to give him a left pinkie.
-rising action

When old man pull out the his ciger American boy offered the light and said
"Here, let me give you a light." The American boy held up his lighter.

"Dat will not work in dis wind."

"Sure, it'll work. It always works.
Then they started to aguing about the his light.
-climam
When they went to old man's room and start the bet.
-falling acttion
When the lady came to the room and stop the bet.
- denoument
When boy gave to the key to the woman they saw her hand and she only had one finger and thumb./
2) Character
-protagonist (main character)
the narrator. because this story talked by this point of view.

- antagonist (force opposing the main character)
the old man because main character of the narrator try to stop the bet, but old man keep stirring up the American cedet.

- static (remain the same)
The English girl.

-round (complex with many characteristics)
the little old man. because if the person is normal never bet the person's finger.
-flat (single or simple characteristics)

-stock character (stereotype)

-dynamic (changes throughout)
the American cadet. because first of all he refused the bet, but after that he changed his mind and challenge the bet.
3) Setting
- atmosphere
Story take place evening of Jamaica.

-time "it was getting on toward six o'clock.

-place 
In Jameica.

4) Theme
this short story is based on suspence. Also we don't know what going to happen.
5) Pint of View
-first person
First person is a the main chracter. (who taking this story.)

-third person (omniscient, limited omniscient, objective/limited)
6) Foreshadowing
"I must say I didn't much like the way he was behaving. It seemed he was already trying to make something out of this, and to emberrass the boy, and at the same time I had the feeling he was relishing a private little secret all his own."

Tuesday, 13 January 2015

Summative Eassay

 In this world most of the people decide the person by appearence or attitude. Then put thier charactristic to own head. However, do you know all about the person's mind? Probably you are going to change your mind about the person. From the book "The Curious Incident of the dog in the Night" by Mark Haddon and the play " Romeo and Juliet" both have incidents which the reader will initally judge harshly, but change their mind about with more thought.

 From "The Curious incident of the dog in the Night Time"you could findout that main charactor Christopher is not normal . In the book he wrote the chapter by prime numbers, when chapter change the story will change to totally different, also he don't like touching by people and if they do he hit them, and when he found the dog with pitch fork he pulled out the fork and he hugged the bloody dog. Most reader would think Christopher is a crazy person. However if you read it through you will find the he is a special needs person. He has autism, He likes math and science and he didn't read peoper novles because he couldn't understand figuretive language. Also he didn't like being around with people when he get into that situation he rolled back onto the lawn and pressed his forehead to the ground and make a noise like groaning. He said this will calm him down.

 From "Romeo and Juliet" we could find the same suituetion. The person is Lady Capulet. At the beggining of the story she doesn't act like she is Juliet's mother. What she did was having a party, try not to upset her husband and when Juliet needs mother's help she coldly ignores Juliet. However there are reasons why she became like this. When Lady Cuplet gave birth to Juliet, she was only welve to thirteen years old. It is hard for a girl this age to become a mother. So Juliet was raised by a nurse Juliet has the closest bond with her nurse. This made difficulty for Lady Cuplet to get close to Juliet and become a real mother. It seem to Lady Cuplet didn't love Juliet; however, when Juliet dies Lady Cuplet cries for her. So this will make that she loved Juliet. 

 I had same experience when I was young. It was age of 6 and I was in gread 1. In my class there are one girl (her name is Ali.) she couldn't talk properly so she didn't have any friends. I think my classmates thought Ali is not normal. Since it was hard to hear what she said then then avoided her. I did the same thing to her. One day I talked to my mother about Ali . Then my mother told me to not make fun of her because she is getting hurt when people treat her like that. Also, mother said Ali is having a hard time so help her out. Next day I talked to Ali and we became friends. I found out the difficulty of talking was not that bad. Also her story was really funny and I spat forgot that she was having any difficulty. So this experience changed my first thought about her. It also changed me because I talk to people more and made to see the other side of them.

 When people meeting new people, they decide what kind of a person the other is by first impressions. However humans can't tell all things by first impressions. So if you meet someone new, don't decide too quickly. Take the te and get to know each other. This will change to see people more carefully and could find the inside of them.

Wednesday, 17 December 2014

Argumentative essay. Who Killed Willington?

  Christopher Boone finds himself in the most mysterious accident of all the time. In this book, he plays the role of a detective and finds out unbelievable facts about the people around him. The development of how this story turns out is unpredictable. At last, he will find out who the real killer of the dog. However, in my analysis, the suspect who killed Willington is Christopher's father.


    In the story we could find the strange behavior from Christopher's father. It looks like he is trying to stop Christopher from finding the killer. When Christopher asks his dad several times about the possible of doing the detactive work to find the killer, Christopher's father gets really angry and shouts at him to stay out pf other people's business. Also, the other time was when Christopher got home late after talking to Mrs. Alexander. Then Mr. Boone starts to ask him several questions. Mr. Boone knows Christopher will go out at night but why does he has to worry about where Christopher goen during the day?. One more thing the clue from the book is the secound clue from Sherlock Holmes. It said "Stapleton is the only person who knows to get through the Grimpen Mire and he tells Watson to saty out of it for his own safe." So Mr. Boone is doing same thing as Stapleton. Both people are trying to hide something for their own safe. Thoses three pieces of evidence support that Mr. Boone is the killer.

     In the beginning of the story we found the Mr. Boone and Mrs. Shears are having a affair. Inthey want it to become a permanent relationship however, they would need to get rid Christopher. So Mrs. Shears kill dog and makes look like Christopher did it. So that Christopher will have to go to jail. This one is one of the red herring because from the story we could suggest that Mrs. Shears is not the killer od Willington. After her dog was killed she says to Christopher, "What in fuck's name have you done to my dog."So this will represent that she wasn't awear of dog's death. Next day when Christopher went to her house she said " I really don't think I want to see you right now." and " If you don't go now I will call the police again." this will explain she is upset about her dog's death.

   Here is best evidence which support that Mr. Boone is the suspect who killed the dog. In the story Cristopher's father said with anger, "Christopher, you have to stay out of truble OK?"He keeps saying that Chridstopher should not get involved with solving Willington's death. More importantly, when Christopher says "I wonder if the police will find out who killed him and punish the person." his father shows his frustration and anger when "he banged the steering wheel with his fist and the car weaved a little bit across the dotted line in the middle of the road and he shoulted 'I said leave it, for God's sake."' Usually people didn't react this way. This react has very strong evidence to support the idea that Mr. Boone is hideing something that he doesn't want to revealed about the dog's death.

  Overalls each of three paragraphs includes strong evidence support my belief that Mr. Boone has killed Willington. In the story, Christopher's father's statments, peculiar reactions and gehaviors to avoid dealing with the incident of the dog's are very suspieious. It determines that the father is the prime suspect of killing Willington. Mr. Boone is try to hide the truth because of that he is stragling. However someday people finds out. So my suggestion is tell the truth and from the worries.

Tuesday, 16 December 2014

Argumentative Essay

So my thesis of who killed Willington is Christophor's father. 

Clues from the book.

1, when Christophor try to find the muder of Willington he always get really upset and keep telling Christophor to get away from it. Also at the Sherlock Holmes's clues 2 is fit in to father.