From "The Curious incident of the dog in the Night Time"you could findout that main charactor Christopher is not normal . In the book he wrote the chapter by prime numbers, when chapter change the story will change to totally different, also he don't like touching by people and if they do he hit them, and when he found the dog with pitch fork he pulled out the fork and he hugged the bloody dog. Most reader would think Christopher is a crazy person. However if you read it through you will find the he is a special needs person. He has autism, He likes math and science and he didn't read peoper novles because he couldn't understand figuretive language. Also he didn't like being around with people when he get into that situation he rolled back onto the lawn and pressed his forehead to the ground and make a noise like groaning. He said this will calm him down.
From "Romeo and Juliet" we could find the same suituetion. The person is Lady Capulet. At the beggining of the story she doesn't act like she is Juliet's mother. What she did was having a party, try not to upset her husband and when Juliet needs mother's help she coldly ignores Juliet. However there are reasons why she became like this. When Lady Cuplet gave birth to Juliet, she was only welve to thirteen years old. It is hard for a girl this age to become a mother. So Juliet was raised by a nurse Juliet has the closest bond with her nurse. This made difficulty for Lady Cuplet to get close to Juliet and become a real mother. It seem to Lady Cuplet didn't love Juliet; however, when Juliet dies Lady Cuplet cries for her. So this will make that she loved Juliet.
I had same experience when I was young. It was age of 6 and I was in gread 1. In my class there are one girl (her name is Ali.) she couldn't talk properly so she didn't have any friends. I think my classmates thought Ali is not normal. Since it was hard to hear what she said then then avoided her. I did the same thing to her. One day I talked to my mother about Ali . Then my mother told me to not make fun of her because she is getting hurt when people treat her like that. Also, mother said Ali is having a hard time so help her out. Next day I talked to Ali and we became friends. I found out the difficulty of talking was not that bad. Also her story was really funny and I spat forgot that she was having any difficulty. So this experience changed my first thought about her. It also changed me because I talk to people more and made to see the other side of them.
When people meeting new people, they decide what kind of a person the other is by first impressions. However humans can't tell all things by first impressions. So if you meet someone new, don't decide too quickly. Take the te and get to know each other. This will change to see people more carefully and could find the inside of them.
Hey Miki good start, :) a few things think about are the spelling of words and some punctuation. Overall I get the idea of what you're getting at. Keep going.
ReplyDeleteYour essay is great put I noticed some spelling and grammar mistakes. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, I really like your essay just a few punctuation errors but other then that, it's well written:)
ReplyDeleteYour essay was very good and descriptive but their are some spelling and punctuation mistakes
ReplyDeleteGreat start , there are some spelling mistakes but other then that your essay is really good.
ReplyDeleteMiki I really like how you worded this. I also like the personal story you shared because it teaches a really important lesson. It may have been uncomfortable for you to talk to her at first, since everyone else ignored her, yet you chose to do something that they weren't doing and you benefitted in the end by making a friend. I think that you have interesting stories to share and I think you should keep doing what you're doing because it's really nice.
ReplyDeleteYour peers have already commented for me. Great ideas and examples. Your grammar slows the reading but doesn't hinder the meaning. Keep being positive Miki!
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